Summer Shorts Progress Report

Title: The Whisper Queen's Daughter
Words Today: 1000
Words Total: 5,307
Summer Shorts Total : 5307/ 5307

Finally finished this. I'm quite happy with it. Obviously there are things that need to be improved, and I want to expand the ending a little, but that can wait til when I start typing and editing in a day or so. Also, I am never ever ever writing anything of this length on paper ever again/

Summer Shorts Progress Report

Title: The Whisper Queen's Daughter
Words Today: 1,037
Words Total: 4,307
Summer Shorts Total: 4307/ 5000

Favourite Sentence: "A golden amber glow swaying in the growing darkness. They had lost the moon in the marsh."

I'm pleased at how well this is going. The plot's a little contrived, the viewpoint and the characterisation need work, and the style has to be kept in check or it becomes purple, plus I'm not sure shortening Alexander's name works. But still ,for a first draft, I'm quite happy with it.

In other news, Storm of Zehir is looking a bit less exciting.
Mainly this quote:
"In Storm of Zehir, we intend to take interaction to a new level. One way we are doing that is reducing the amount of lengthy un-interactive scenes and adding maximum reactivity to conversations. Cohorts help us to achieve this goal. Though they lack complex conversations of their own, and none of them will be love interests, they offer special responses in conversations that the player can choose, or not. The end result is that cohorts always give you more choices rather than sometimes “hijacking” and taking away choices. Because my meager explanation may not be clear enough, here is a specific example of this"

I'm not quite so interested now. I hope Obsidian prove my fears wrong and I'm misreading this. I really hope we're not going to see Dungeon Siege-esque  pack mules for companions.

Summer Shorts Progress Report

Title: The Whisper Queen's Daughter
Words Today: 653
Words Total: 3,270
Summer Shorts Total: 3270/ 5000

Favourite Sentence: "Oh, well done, Alex. Why don't you just invite the whole bloody forest along with us!"

I think I may have to kill Primrose, I'm far too fond of her.

Summer Shorts Progress Report

Title: The Whisper Queen's Daughter
Words Todays: 682
Words Total: 2,617
Summer Shorts Total: 2617/ 5000

Favourite Sentence: "Twice Alex stepped upon a corpse, bones aching and cracking, rotten flesh clinging to him like an unwanted lover. Corpse-lights drifted up, ice blue and murderous. Cold hearts set against his racing own."

Summer Shorts - Progress Report

Title: The Whisper Queen's Daughter
Words Today: 809
Words Total: 1,935
Summer Shorts Total: 1935/ 5000

Favourite Sentence: "Ice cold it  shimmered and shivered in the silver glow of the silent moon"

This one is so much fun. Forests and faeries and fun imagery. Oh my!

I haven't updated this since December?  Wow. I fail.

Anyways, I recently entered sora_blue's Summer Shorts Competition in the hopes of getting something written after GCSE enforced inactivity (and incidentally, the GCSEs were a huge fucking waste of 2 years of my life). After rewriting the same 3 paragraphs of one story 5 times, I finally realised it wasn't working. I've discovered that if I know exactly what's going to happen in my stories and to which characters, I lose interest. With my now dead story, the problem was I wasn't enjoying writing, I was just getting from Plot Point A to Plot Point B by way of Exposition C. Not good. Still some of the ideas and characters I might reuse for my Nano.

I am now writing something entirely different and have no clue whatsoever of the plot or characters, and am enjoying writing it a hell of a lot more. Pity I wasted 4 days on the now mercifully dead first story. I shall now go and bury it at the crossroads with a vampire through its black heart.

BTW Bonekickers is possibly the bestest thing on TV. Ever.